प्यार करना बहुत ही सहज है, जैसे कि ज़ुल्म को झेलते हुए ख़ुद को लड़ाई के लिए तैयार करना. -पाश
PS: This poem published in my school magazine 'Pratikhsa' in 2002, when I was in 9th std. Later published in 'Navbharat' Bhopal in Dec2009 issue.Written on Kargil war in sept 2002.
VK BHAI कैसे लिख जाते हो यार ऐसा सब..........
THANKS VK BHAI...AAPNE HUMARE SHATH APNI RACHNA SHARE KI
sahi kaha aapne ... aise hi bebaak likhte raho
yeh sukh kaisa shaasan ka,shaasan re maanav mann ka.giri bhaar bana sa tinka.yeh ghata tope do din ka...kar vijayi ka abhimaan bhang...
True ! wars are just meant for destruction , and any win , is definitely a biggest lose !
I'm speechless...indeed ye haar hi hai....bauhat accha likha hai...kam shabd hain...par message is loud and clear
Dear very nice... i have no words to explain how good it is? You are so talented dear!Have a friendship day too!loveSunshine
@sanjay, sir, thanks for such a nice comment.....but u r the master of this art.ye ques aapse hona chahiye.
@manjeet, thanx ji......chalo aapko yaha aane ka vaqt to mila!
@gazal, saumya. thanx for commenting....ur appreciation is my strength.
@adreamygirl, thanx for visit and comment!@subi, happy frndsp day!
nice one...keep it up
बहुत खूब ... ये जीत नही मानवता की हार है ...
well done..please keep it up..but study is also important.may your dreams come true ,blessings on dussehra.
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PS: This poem published in my school magazine 'Pratikhsa' in 2002, when I was in 9th std. Later published in 'Navbharat' Bhopal in Dec2009 issue.
Written on Kargil war in sept 2002.
VK BHAI
कैसे लिख जाते हो यार ऐसा सब..........
THANKS VK BHAI...
AAPNE HUMARE SHATH APNI RACHNA SHARE KI
sahi kaha aapne ... aise hi bebaak likhte raho
yeh sukh kaisa shaasan ka,
shaasan re maanav mann ka.
giri bhaar bana sa tinka.
yeh ghata tope do din ka...
kar vijayi ka abhimaan bhang...
True ! wars are just meant for destruction , and any win , is definitely a biggest lose !
I'm speechless...indeed ye haar hi hai....bauhat accha likha hai...kam shabd hain...par message is loud and clear
Dear very nice... i have no words to explain how good it is? You are so talented dear!
Have a friendship day too!
love
Sunshine
@sanjay, sir, thanks for such a nice comment.....but u r the master of this art.
ye ques aapse hona chahiye.
@manjeet, thanx ji......chalo aapko yaha aane ka vaqt to mila!
@gazal, saumya. thanx for commenting....ur appreciation is my strength.
@adreamygirl, thanx for visit and comment!
@subi, happy frndsp day!
nice one...keep it up
बहुत खूब ... ये जीत नही मानवता की हार है ...
well done..
please keep it up..
but study is also important.
may your dreams come true ,blessings on dussehra.
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